Human Rights Research Essay Outline

Human Rights Research Essay Outline

                                                          Children’s Rights In Qatar

    

 Introduction:

According to Forbes, Qatar is now one of the richest countries in the world. However, it does not necessarily mean that they have successfully made their citizens live in a good quality of life. Even though Qatar has a great economic potential to fulfil it’s citizens’ demand, it fails to do so. 

Children are abused physically and sexually, do not have access to education, have to marry early, are forced to become labours, in threat of being orphans. 

*I will try to put some basic background information about Qatar in this introduction part, for example, the immigrants ratio, it’s location. 

Body

“According to Humanium, the minimum marriage for a girl is 16 years old while for boys it is 18 years old. In other words, children might have to marry before they have the ability to work since at this age they should be still going to school.

According to Humaium, parents do not think it is necessary for children to go to school.  

Qatar has signed and ratified the Convention of the Rights of the Child by 1995. In other words, they agree to not offend children’s rights and it is their duty not to violate the rights. (made a reservation for article 2 and 14)

According to Scott, most domestic abuses are carried out by non family members such as maids and drivers

According to Scott. boys are physically abused while females are mentally abused. Also, those who are domestically abused are likely to abuse others at school. 

According to Humanium, children, mainly Africans, are forced to be labours. RefutationSome may say that in 2005 Qatar has forbidden child labor. However, the law only protects its citizens and the foreigner are still vulnerable(*there’s a great number of foreigners)

Accroding to Human Rights Watch, nearly 90% of Qatar’s population is foreigners

According to study, the government sees non citizens as contract labourers and they do not deserve legal or citizenship rights. 

Immigrants are from Indians, Pakistanis, Nepalese, Iranians, Philippinos, Egyptians, Sri Lankans

Citizens are not allowed to leave the country unless their employers allow. (labor workers bring their family to the country which in turn mean that children are also not allowed to leave).  

World cup 2022 kill employees>orphaned children. 

Transition/Refutation as Transition to Refined Answer or Secondary research question(s)

I will relate the UNDR, CRC with the resources that I have found. 

Refined Answer the research question, or Answer to the secondary question.

what is a secondary question?

Theoretical Discussion.

I will talk about Donnelly’s book and the Globalisation part in particular. I will explain how the world cup 2022(result of globalisation) serves as a good chance to stop human rights violations

Refutation (objection/ rebuttal)

I might give refutations after each of my paragraphs since I will be including many refutations and it will look more structured if I put an counter-argument below my argument. 

Conclusion

anti-abuse organisations and campaigns

supervision in schools where abuse happens commonly such as toilets and playgrounds

compulsory checkups for children’s mental and physical health

I will state the topic sentences again and briefly extend them.

I will focus on more suggestions since I think it is the main reason why we need to read the essay. I will reference solutions from both the resources that I have found and base on my analysis. I will give general warning if readers do not follow and listen to the things that I have mentioned. 

http://www.forbes.com/pictures/egim45egde/1-qatar/